love is on auto

Posted on 29 August 2005 by Liza Mae V.

Opening my eyes
I see you now
hoping to see you
in my tomorrows
and if only
my maybe’s
are certainties
I wouldn’t be
so careful about
these feelings
thought to be delusions
thought to be reality
thought’s not worth thinking about
because my thoughts
only rot this beauty
my taintedness
possessed from
past experiences
which shouldn’t be here
they should
be steered away from
before they become
problematic
because love should
be automatic.

-Liza Mae

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5 Comments For This Post

  1. muszicluvher Says:

    bloody LOVELY. peace.love.soul

    very nice *form* poem. i remember when i was first introduced to poetry…it was the 10th grade and we all had to write all the different types of poems to include one such as the one u have here..in the shape of something. had to make it flow along with the words…the accompanying photo is hot as well…good job miss seksi liza

    ps: only change i would make is the possessed line…i can’t think of a word to replace it but something that is a synonym for gained…

  2. lizamae Says:

    Re: bloody LOVELY. peace.love.soul

    true … true. =)

    i wrote this months ago…don’t know quite when because I didn’t date it. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I was writing journals since I was in grade 2, but back then I used to write about events and as time progressed and I started to have ‘feelings’ for boys, I wrote about my feelings … and now I tie the two together.

    -Liza Mae

  3. muszicluvher Says:

    Re: bloody LOVELY. peace.love.soul

    yea i hate a few poems that i don’t have dates on cuz i forgot to write it in when i started digitizing.

  4. roncorleone Says:

    nicely written… i likes!

  5. lizamae Says:

    Thank you. =)

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